28.10.14

A Glass Heart


Her voice is like a beautiful masterpiece,
each note is like a violin on its strings.
Her face is like a sheer veil of powder,
delicate and pale it is when you see it.
Her eyes are like dark blue diamonds,
almost like sapphires.
Her heart...is like a glass heart,
crushed, and now shattered.
Carefully, one must pick up the speckles 
of  fractured, now wounded heart.

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Hello, lovelies! I hope you liked this poem I made for you. ☺
Also, thank you so much for 38 followers! I love you guys! If I haven't followed you yet, then comment below and I'll try to get back with you as soon as possible.

Thanks for reading.

27 comments:

  1. Lovely, and beautiful! Love your blog! -Bethany! http://bethanysbrightlife.blogspot.com

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  2. You're the definition of a beautiful writer! -Jordan Sky

    being-hidden.blogspot.com

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    1. Haha, I don't know if I'd consider myself that..but thank you anyway! ^.^

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  3. So beautiful! You have writing talent! I love your blog-and you totally deserve 38 followers!
    Also, sorry for not commenting as much as I would have liked to on your blog. -Jollygirl from the blog: reflectionsofajollygirl.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you! xox
      No, it's okay! I haven't posted that much these past weeks, so you're completely fine! ^.^

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  4. You just blew my mind away, Rachel. You have a gift for writing. Beautiful. X
    - June

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  5. Oh, so beautiful :) You are such an excellent writer!

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    1. Thank you so much for your feedback, Lauren! <3

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  6. The poem is beautiful, Rachel! I love it. <3

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    1. Thanks so much, Bekah! <3 I'm glad you liked it. ^.^

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  7. Aww this poem is so well written! <3
    Thank you Rachel!:)
    Just chanced upon your blog and I'm in love with it already! You have a new follower <3
    Can't wait to read your future posts:)
    June
    The Journeys of My Beating Heart

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    1. Thank you so much for following me! It means a TON! <3

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  8. This is beautiful! I love your blog so much, I'm your 40th follower! xx

    arushee | unadorned gifts

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    1. Thank you so much for following me! xox I'll be sure to check your blog out too! ^.^

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  9. I noticed that you made a comment about not being able to follow on my blog. I'll let you in on a little tip for future times you want to follow people's blogs but their button isn't working. If you hit the tiny two squares and then click follow on the pop up window it should work.
    See you around,
    Jollygirl

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    1. Wow, that's awesome! How.. did I not know how to do that? o.O Thank you! ^.^

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  10. You wrote that poem! Wow! You have talent.
    Amanda
    www.southkakalakigirl.com

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  11. That was beautiful...
    Your blog is wonderful, I love visiting it.

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    1. PS: I've nominated you over at my blog.

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  12. This poem is so beautiful. So talented. :)

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  13. I've nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award: http://almostcompletelymad.blogspot.com.au/2014/11/blogger-recognition-award.html

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  14. Hi Rachel, Love your writing style...have you ever considered putting all your posts together in a book? I added myself to your blog to be able to keep up with you, and was wondering if you would life to stop over to our Christian Blog and check us out, maybe follow us back...Thanks and keep up the good work..Linda B

    https://bricesmicechristianbookreviews.blogspot.com/

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